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Dark Poetry #1

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jstevens
Junior Member

since 1999-12-29

Posts 11
austin,texas

0 posted 1999-12-29 05:03 PM

you seem to understand something,
something that is bigger than
you and me and all of the sky
but it is your little secret
locked away,
and your not saying a word.
I told you three days ago
that secrets are not good and
what good did that do?
well, you just keep your
secret understanding to yourself,
and I'll blame you
for all of the lost tomorrows that
slipped away through your locked heart.

[This message has been edited by jstevens (edited 12-29-1999).]

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 1999-12-29 07:37 PM

Honey this is a goody that is for sure, but we do not swear here in Passions. We do have rules and that is one, nothing too graphic either. SO could you be a sweetie and replace the word 'bitch' with some other noun. If it's not done in 24 hours I shall change it myself. Hope you understand if there are any problems please don't hesitate to email me. We all make these mistakes when we are new here

At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato)
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 1999-12-30 06:33 PM

Thanks JS we appreciate your co-operation

At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato)
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

3 posted 2000-01-02 06:11 PM

JT, I didn't catch it the first time through, but I'll tell you what, I'd been cussing too...LOL Great poem.

Michael

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