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A Seasonal Life
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A Seasonal Life |
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highwayman Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 42Cookeville, Tennessee, usa |
A Seasonal Life How does one deal, With so much pain, When it's as big as a storm, And hard as the rain? The main problemis, That it comes and goes, Like the changing of seasons, Or the melting of snow. I deal with it daily, or from time to time, It can come at a rush, Or stop on a dime. It's hard to predict, Just like the rain So, now I ask you, How do I deal with such pain |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
I really love this poem  |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Awesome words my friend. Best I can offer you is "one day at a time" and try not to give your pain to others along the way. I've stood under that cloud many years but too often was a cause of my own strife. Michael |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome to the dark forum I love your name 'Highwayman' reminds me of a much loved song "highwayman" by Loreena McKennit. As for how do you cope, with hope in your heart, one day at a time. At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. (Plato) ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Welcome! This poem seems to dipict everything you are feeling so very well! JOY |
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winterinblue Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 32 |
Pain is something I am much too well acquainted with - but I see you are on the right path - writing - to put your grief on paper is a very healing thing. |
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Niemczak Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 51 |
Coping and dealing with pain can be the hardest tests we ever face, but in time it shall be your greatest reward. I loved your poem and I hope to see more. |
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