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lisaloco New Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 7 |
Loneliness Looking, beyond my vision to fill the emptiness in me. Delving, into the depths of the unreal to find the one thing I can't see. There is one thing that abounds in my dreamlike state abyss. Corrupts my mind, binds my soul. It's name is loneliness. Nothing can fill this gaping hole, this cavernous nothing of my life. Searching is just a senseless idea, but an idea that fills all my time. Surrounded by other bodies yet not feeling their presence within. My soul cowers in the darkness of its cave waiting for the walls to give in. Hold me if you dare, try to look into these eyes. Tell me what lurks in this deep unknown. The answer you never will find. |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Very Well done. I like this tremendously. Hope passions will help your loneliness to subside. Looking forward to your next piece. -RS There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief - Hendrix |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Reminds me of a line I once heard - "They see the painted picture, think they can peel the guise - But they could never understand what goes on behind these eyes." Good poem, Liked this one alot. Michael |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
"Searching is just a senseless idea, but an idea that fills all my time"--interesting to think about...yes i think most people spend most their time "searching" or atleast i do...I'm liken this poem, lisaloco... ashley (Starboards) ************************* "It would take an acrobat, I've already tried all that, I'm gonna let him fly" -Dixie Chicks ************************* |
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