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~~Please Dont Let Me Fall Asleep~~
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~~Please Dont Let Me Fall Asleep~~ |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Insomnia Ripping at my brain I'm so scared to fall asleep scared to find you again Please keep me up keep me from falling The light is growing dimmer I can hear sleep calling No! No! I must not fall asleep I cant stand another night dreaming Once again I cant afford to weep So, if you see me sleeping please dont hesitate to wake me because you know not of what's in my mind and how far my dreams often take me. < !signature--> ************************* "It would take an acrobat, I've already tried all that, I'm gonna let him fly" -Dixie Chicks ************************* [This message has been edited by starboards (edited 12-18-1999).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
well WAKE UP THEN!!!!  Ever seen Nightmare on Elm Street 1 - 5 or 6? Do what they did, change the dream, so don't dream of him.... instead in your dreams create the perfect guy and rendevous' with him every night What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Isis-- I cant seem to write poems on good stuff so i chose to write them about depressing things...it's not always my emotions that im expressing but past ones that i have felt! Ashley ************************* "It would take an acrobat, I've already tried all that, I'm gonna let him fly" -Dixie Chicks ************************* |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
That is the thing we do take these poems literally a lot, perhaps we should all leave little notes, no I'm not depressed on the bottom????? What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Isis-- Let me explain my emotions...I dont feel depressed for losing him, just for losing the memories, the love, and the feeling of total happiness, so yes, maybe I am depressed but not for losing him, but for losing the one thing I found in him, can you understand?? sorry if this sounds alittle weird but i tried to describe it to the best of my ability. Thanks for listening ashley ************************* "It would take an acrobat, I've already tried all that, I'm gonna let him fly" -Dixie Chicks ************************* |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I get you hon What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
okay, i'm glad that someone does...and thanks for being there for me...as i will always be there for you... ashley ************************* "It would take an acrobat, I've already tried all that, I'm gonna let him fly" -Dixie Chicks ************************* |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
This struck a nerve -- I have been here before. Thank you for sharing. --Kess You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Excellent job...I haven't been in this particular situation before but you explained it well enough that it's almost as understandable as actually experiencing it. |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Thanks Skyfyre and DE...i've tried my best to express this...i hope i did a good job! ashley |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Uh, been there. Have subjected myself to bllod shot eye, caffeine wars with Nightmare most of my life. Good poem...though a subject that thoroughly makes me cringe. Michael |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Haunting piece.... Hope I never go there. -RS There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief - Hendrix |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Thanks Michael, freebyrd, and skyfyre...i'm so glad that you guys are here for me...i will never find a better family |
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