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***Life (inspired by Isis)***
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***Life (inspired by Isis)*** |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Life... Giving me tests... Tests that I can't pass... Tests that were ment to hurt, not cure. Life... Never ceasing it's insanity... Never allowing myself to be me... Forever chanting my faults and flaws. Life... unnoticed by everyone... Placing you in front of me constantly... Keeping me from breathing. Life... Never goes my way... always bringing bad days... Why wont it stop?? Life... the only thing that contains me... the one thing that i cant fix... continues to keep me away from you. ************************* "It would take an acrobat, I've already tried all that, I'm gonna let him fly" -Dixie Chicks ************************* |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Isis-- How was that one...i just decided to write on to you while i was online...do you write your poems out on paper or on the computer?? Ashley ************************* "It would take an acrobat, I've already tried all that, I'm gonna let him fly" -Dixie Chicks ************************* |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Ashley my friend it was lovely.. I write usually when online, rarely on paper.. a modern poet  What was the one thing you couldn't fix? Cos already I know you are a better person since you've come here.. Thankyou my dear for dedicating a poem to me What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Isis-- Oh i c...a modern poet...i have trouble writing things on the computer, i mostly write my stuff on paper. Life is the one thing I cant fix, it's like if you mess up you cant go back and make it right, it just wont happen. I'm glad that you like this one isis as much as i liked writing it for you Ashley ************************* "It would take an acrobat, I've already tried all that, I'm gonna let him fly" -Dixie Chicks ************************* |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Honey you haven't messed up your entire life!!!  You have friends, family, school etc. Hobbies? Put it down to a learning experience you won't make the same mistake again will you???? What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Isis-- I know..but it seems like it right now...please forgive me for being childish... ashley ************************* "It would take an acrobat, I've already tried all that, I'm gonna let him fly" -Dixie Chicks ************************* |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
This looks like a modern poets work to me. Please don't lose any of those papers before you get those words up here. Your quite good at this poetry stuff. I'm working on it every day in my mind. Sometimes they even make it here. Nice work. -RS There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief - Hendrix |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Don't live to regret the things you've seen, heard, or experienced because it's all of these things that make you who you are. You may be lost and confused now, maybe even stumbling towards hopelessness, but you have to remember that tomorrow is a new day and even though you can't bring back or correct yesterday, you still have the rest of your life to live. Your life, which is the only thing that souly belongs to you. And only you can make sunshine out of darkness. (or darkness out of sunshine, whichever you prefer...I, myself prefer darkness over sunshine anytime) Well, I wish you luck and I hope that you find your way or atleast comfort in someone else for the time being. Try not to be alone with yourself, for you may become used to it and, trust me, it's a lot harder that way. No reason to become your own enemy. |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Thanks freebyrd and dark...i'm so glad that you can understand what i'm going through...i dont regret what i have exprienceed just the fact that i could have made it different, or so i say...but can you really change fate?? i dont know...im just rambling again... ************************* "It would take an acrobat, I've already tried all that, I'm gonna let him fly" -Dixie Chicks ************************* |
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