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Life Goes On |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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The day you ended our love, A part of me died. But I can't help but think that, as you gave back that love, You were the one who cried. You said you didn't need me. Did you really mean it? But as time went on, I began to see That you didn't know what you wanted from life. Only that you didn't want me in it. Life goes on. I didn’t think it would. Life goes on. Even as by the bay alone I stood. You're gone. You've hurt me. I'll think about you from time to time. When I do, maybe I'll shed a tear. Not because I'll miss you, But because I'll feel sorry for you. Because our love was something wonderful to see, But you threw it away. Life goes on. Not with you. But with her. That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Sven-- Yes, life does go on...and it definatly was her lose!!! keep your head up!!  starboards |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Yes indeedy life goes on, but sometimes the journey is all too rough  Wise words my friend What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
It does go on...sometimes you just wish it would go on a little faster and a little easier. Another good one, Sven. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoyed your poem very much. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Now this is sappy BUT You need not stand alone at the bay, for a loving liked soul is always but a thought away...... I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Oh wow, this is sad! Good writing, but sad. MagnoliaBlue  Pay a visit to: http://cyberageadventures.com You will love it! "A poem is just an expression of my life and heart."*CJB* ~*Skipper Jim, I love you!Your Lady June*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . this is an old one of mine. . . I wrote it 12 years ago. . . it's the final memory of my first love. . . vandana, thank you again my friend. . . Isis, I know Magnolia, my pain was very much that day. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Sven. She took for granted what she had, while it hurts not to have someone appreciate your love at the end of the day it is her loss. I am sure that she wished that she had nurtured your love. You did the right thing and moved on. a sad poem, but as you said life goes on. enjoyed this one a lot. ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers "Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany Culture, alienation, boredom and despair" "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. |
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