Dark Poetry #1 |
Hate |
JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Hate Is such a strong word Stinging in the soul Meaning it at the moment Later wondering if it really was... Hate Is such a powerful word Ringing like longful bells Said to inflict hurt Later, it's brought onto yourself. Hate Is such a word Hastily said and recieved Because hate that isn't true Isn't hate at all. Just a misplaced word. JOY |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Loved every word. Hate is such a powerful and draining emotion. Well Done Jenny Lee Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
i agree. hate is a very powerful and controlling emotion. this is a great description of it. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
My personally belief is you cannot hate what you did not first love, or where youe were not first hurt. I believe love to be natural emotion, and hate to be manufactured, deriving from misplaced, lesser emotion, therein, I wonder can "Hate" ever really be true? Michael [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 12-14-1999).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Great poem Michael, good theory. Myself, I say hating kills the hater inch by inch. I try never to hate, I may get really ticked off but not hateful. Wonderful theory to explore.. What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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