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The Heart in Winter
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The Heart in Winter |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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The heart in Spring feels the gentle breeze The touch of your hand The smile of your face, so eager to please. Your heart warms my heart, and puts me at ease. The heart in Summer feels the heat of passion's caress The touch of a lover The face of pleasure, this feeling the best. Your heart joins my heart, and puts me at rest. The heart in Fall feels the chill of dying love The touch pulled away The frown of disgust, the death of the dove Your heart leaves my heart, and leaves me unloved. The heart in Winter feels nothing at all Frozen in ice, untouched The cry of pain shows, not hearing love's call Until the angel comes. . . to break down that wall. That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Sven, You've outdone yourself this time buddy!! Seasons and cycles intertwined yet different. Simply beautiful  What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I love this one, it is full of poetic beauty Jennifer Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Wonderful! I am speechless by such powerful and beautiful words. I especially connected with the last stanza. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Ah, the Seasons of Life beautifully rendered, Sven. Very well done. Michael |
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