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danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

0 posted 1999-12-13 02:08 AM

I know this isn't my best work. But hey, I needed to vent a little.

So, you tell me that your leaving
Am I supposed to be surprised?
To be completely honest
I was getting tired of your lies

I've already cried too many tears
So excuse my lack of reaction
I guess that's just what happens
over four long painful years

I should've known you would'nt change
I should've told you long ago
to pack your bags and leave
So maybe we are both to blame

There's nothing more that I can say
There's nothing more that I can do
Except to bid good riddance
And send you on your way

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 1999-12-13 02:27 AM

Vent away my friend!! Got rid of your oops too you may see.
Glad you did say good riddance, you did enough!!

What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Medevil blue
New Member

since 1999-12-12

Posts 4

2 posted 1999-12-13 05:49 AM

Keep up the good work danni!
It's really nice to read a lot of good poetry, hope to hear more from you soon

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From the mud to the stars
-To kill a Mockingbird

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

3 posted 1999-12-13 08:28 PM

Excellent verse Danni... Enjoyed the read very much !!

Jenny

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

4 posted 1999-12-14 01:59 AM

Thanks to everyone for letting me get away with a mediocre, (did i spell that right?), poem for the sake of venting. You didn't have to be nice and say it was good.

lol.
Seriously, thanks bunches!

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

5 posted 1999-12-14 02:37 PM

We all need to vent a little, but not all can do it so gracefully.

Good work.

Michael

lostboy
Member

since 1999-11-21

Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA

6 posted 1999-12-14 03:00 PM

Vent all you want danni.
There's only so many tears you can cry
So many times you can can say goodbye
So many times you can walk
So many times you can talk
There's only so many stars in the sky
There's only so many tears you can cry
Then....SEE-YA!!!
"I" think your poems excellent!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 1999-12-14 04:55 PM

As they say in the vernacular. . . Rave on sister. . . Rave on!!

Sometimes, it's good to vent. . . but to do so so gracefully, I have to agree with Michael on this one. . .

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

8 posted 1999-12-15 01:29 AM

Thank you guys soooo much. You all sure know how to give a girl's ego a nice big boost.

And I love ya for it!

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