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medusa Junior Member
since 1999-12-09
Posts 23 |
The dark sea is where i wait for you. I wait for only you knowing that our existence as one will hurt us both. i wait for you i long for you i stand alone listening to the soft waves carress the night shore I am empty without you. and now god how i hate you your exsistence on this earth irritates my soul. Pathetic being! wretched from the whore you call mother! You left me and now i am alone so alone i am cold god i hate u i hate u! i stand on the shore hating you but wanting you more and more now that i can not have you! you know that i aim to possess what i cannot have. Bastard!!! May the eternal fire in my soul that was given by you end your happiness! Cold and alone .....I watch the land and sky become one both subdued to the immense darkness of the night Knowing that i love you but hoping you were dead! |
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Stevia Junior Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 28 |
Your peom has very intense feelings.WHen people hurt us and we love them, it is the worst thing that can happen.Keep your head above water and know that not everyone is like that. |
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medusa Junior Member
since 1999-12-09
Posts 23 |
yes i know stevia i know everyone is not like that!!!! thank god!thanks for your comment! |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Oh yeah, you can definately feel the anger behind this one. I have felt it too. Great work! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I feel your anger too. I've stood just where you are. Wonderful piece, strong. But glance around the coastline, there is happiness awaiting you!!  The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I see that some are exerting their anger in this way. . . excellent! Good for the soul to get it all out. . . Powerful words Medusa, liked the way that you liken it to "keeping your head above water" That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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