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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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Can they go a week without causing pain? A week with a little stab somewhere? I'm so sick of trying to work it out, So sick of feeling poorly and in doubt. Sarcasm, stabbing, emotional torture, Invasion of privacy the new order, My heart lies over the border, Where love resides as it oughta. The music's wrong, Can't find any depth can you? The soul is dead don't you see? Nothing worth saving in you. The demon has won, He has his way, Never again you will see, Beauty in the light of day. Red, orange tinged world, I long for the blue, Of peace and happiness, A perfect hue. It is and was and never will be, It is gone, Will it return? Or will the heart remain pale and wan? How can we play? How can we smile again? Monstrous sleep walker, Don't want you to awaken again. The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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summer Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 80long beach .ca.usa |
Oh Isis i really liked this one.. It totally reminds me of my ex husband ..ha ha ha ..Like I said before its your realness that gets me everytime... |
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medusa Junior Member
since 1999-12-09
Posts 23 |
Isis great piece! struck a chord on reality! the sleep walker i could imagine as maybe society,it's morals and conventions! |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I love this... Verse 5 is my very favorite! Well Done piece Warrior Princess  Jenny Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
I really feel your emotion Isis. Please don't let your heart go pale, Ok? |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Truly a great poem dear, and I have to agree with Medusa that this sleepwalker does sound much like society. If all who are born are ment to die, I should not have been born, for I will never die. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Spot on! Society it is. Thanks for reading guys!! The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Continue to speak your heart Isis. . . and you will never be wrong. . . sing on. . . That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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