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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
What Were You Thinking? What the hell was I thinking When I said those words to you A steady stream of epithets Vulgar, but undeniably true. Was I so insensitive? A selfish, cruel fiend. A devil dressed in angel's robes Cunning, vicious and unmistakably mean. Did I cause you to cry? Did I cause you pain? Didn't you whince when I said those words? Didn't you cry when I said them again? Didn't I cry when you did the same to me? Didn't I lose my remaining sanity? Didn't I spend my days courting death? Wasting away my soul, my every living breath. What the hell were you thinking When u did that thing to me? |
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medusa Junior Member
since 1999-12-09
Posts 23 |
that was brillance i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!you did that topic so much better than my vague attempt!!!!i must read more of your work!!!! |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Tis a great piece of work you have added to this place mosh, and I truly hope to read more. If all who are born are ment to die, I should not have been born, for I will never die. |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Brilliant indeed. This piece speaks volumes. Great work mosh. I too look forward to more. Welcome!  |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome to the dark Forum What a wonderful first piece, just what we like. I really enjoyed it. It says so much. Eagerly awaiting more!! The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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~Red~ Junior Member
since 1999-11-02
Posts 36chicago, Ill-na, u.s.a. |
OOOOhhhhhhh!!!!! i really liked this too! i can feel it, that makes it even more kewlz...can't wait to hear more!! ~Why is it that you beleive in perfection my friend? For perfection is a dream, it shall never be acheived. So tell me why you beleive in perfection?....For PErfection doesn't exist..~ |
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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
thanx guys.. i really was nervous about posting something here but now i look forward to contributing more. thanx a lot.. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent!! This is good. . . there is nothing sometimes so satisfying as giving back what you get. . . Welcome my friend. . . That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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