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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

0 posted 2004-05-06 11:22 AM

With misted eyes
I search the horizon
for glimpse of you;
I am sailing on a sea of soft illusions,
beneath the swell and waves
are secrets kept from both of us.

I imagine your line,
the softness of your being,
the smell of your truth;
my eyes seek an horizon beyond reach,
yet my yearning does not seek
the easy choice of soft realities.

If only longing had the power
to bring you to me,
that I might taste your essence

once more.

Thank you Icy!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-05-06 11:25 AM

Bravo!! A beautiful duet by two of Passions's finest writers!!
I do hope you two will du-et again.

~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Lost in you, I found myself. ~

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

2 posted 2004-05-06 11:43 AM

awesome meld here!! wonderful write

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-05-06 12:21 PM

I knew this would be good

great duet!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2004-05-06 12:23 PM

Very beautiful, you two!!
More, please???

Hugs to you both,
Ethel

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2004-05-06 12:31 PM

I didnt want this one to end...
excellent sharing of words you two!!

Edder
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since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

6 posted 2004-05-06 03:22 PM

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2004-05-06 06:20 PM

This was a lovely duet! Congrats to both of you!

quatro
Member

since 2003-04-29

Posts 392
Galveston, Texas

8 posted 2004-05-06 06:28 PM

Bravo!!! (((claps))) ENCORE!

quatro

Opeth
Senior Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

9 posted 2004-05-06 09:57 PM

This duet needs another outing. Enjoyed!

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

10 posted 2004-05-06 10:00 PM

Hey you two...LOVE THIS! Great piece...and I agree...I did not want it to end!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2004-05-07 02:42 AM

nice duet

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

12 posted 2004-05-07 12:38 PM

awesome piece

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

13 posted 2004-05-07 12:42 PM

Oooh! I love this, both of you are amazing writers.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

14 posted 2004-05-07 07:24 PM

Nice...James

True North
Junior Member

since 2004-05-03

Posts 23

15 posted 2004-05-07 08:32 PM

that was an amazing duet between spirituality and materialism...

if writing together results in such pieces, then we should all try this *smile*

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

16 posted 2004-05-09 09:01 AM

You almost took me by force in doing this...not a common experience for me.

I enjoyed it, thanks!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

17 posted 2004-05-10 11:05 AM

Big thanks and hugs to everyone!

Icy~ Force? LOL

I love how you write and it was a true pleasure to intertwine our words...

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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