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Chasing the Clouds
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Chasing the Clouds |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Chasing the Clouds Just a moment's break in spirit, the force of nature left lacking, unrestrained resources of the night keeping dreams from behind closed eyes. Mental messages written in exclamations, transmitted by thunderous applause as the light danced across the walls striking at the sounds of midnight. A walk through darkness, the hallways never ending, intersecting the day's warmth with a chill to remind, prompting the feed of tomorrow, the need to collect one's energy... knowing. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"with a chill to remind, prompting the feed of tomorrow, the need to collect one's energy... knowing." An understanding nod her Maureen. Good one...be strong. Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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MERCURY Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 190Ireland |
Superbly written poem |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
A thunderous applauses can break spirit And disturb the reflecting of the sole and light shines on it In a flash As the little ones dash For cover conveying their fear As the clapping draws near Dark rooms and hallways Strobe and shimmer Quaking as nature plays Outside not to enter another fine poem for this reader to enjoy Gloom |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Good Morning, Nancy  Thank you for your neverending support and understanding of my words... Maureen MERCURY...~smiling~ and appreciating your read and reply M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
PG, Last nights thunder and lightning show kept anyone from sleeping.. Not sure which pounding was greater, that of last night or that resulting in my head today. Thanks for reading *s M |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
M ..... "the need to collect one's energy.." Nicely, and simply put. How true. Bob |
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