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To the West ZZ6 |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
To reach peace and contentment To the western mountains he went Walking onward several a spring day Enjoying the ever rising pathway. A hill would rise before him Cresting in the wind Then the pathway would descend Partway down the other side Where just steps did hide The journey’s morn not then spied. Twist of path from origin Now obscured from him Fading from his memory, Slowly, so slowly, As he stepped away from friends, As the past would end Allowing the future days To control his ways. Gloom |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 I am enjoying this journey...Do you think we can stop at Starbucks? "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
professor, Continuing to enjoy the journeys; especially identified with the last verse. take care, sadie |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
We're all on a journey. Your words make this one more pleasant. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You know I like journey poems.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can really see myself here in him life is a lonely journey, I believe |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
cool piece |
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