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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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She ached promises to God pledging industry she begged ("johnny and the appleseeds") whimpered soliticiously against a hawking of her head beneath the pillowing relief some will fall the beckoning! a finger crook'd before the teeth forgot about themselves and smiled revealing moldy brick she said: "no, you did not witness this" the ground too hard to dig for grave... "tell them all that I died saved..." She hawked pillows with her head aching promises to God. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Howdy Karenity m'witch. An ache as prayer...or prayer in aching... Either way, I like! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"She ached promises to God pledging industry she begged ("johnny and the appleseeds") whimpered soliticiously against a hawking of her head beneath the pillowing relief some will fall the beckoning! a finger crook'd before the teeth forgot about themselves and smiled revealing moldy brick she said: "no, you did not witness this" the ground too hard to dig for grave... "tell them all that I died saved..." She hawked pillows with her head aching promises to God." Yes...I quoted the entire poem.  I was just wondering if anyone has told you lately that you're brilliant? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
me likes! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
very very nice... Regards sudhir |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Fine writing....thank you... Goldenrose. ''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies. |
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Lost Awhile Junior Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 17UK |
Very nice. I only wish I could experience some of the same....He seems to have passed me by. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Ooo ooOO witcheh woOman.. Just popped into my head.  I do LOVE your writings! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh and so do I Gorgeous. So do I. me thinks I shall keep this one.  Mxx What are you my god? You touch me like you are my god |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
"tell them all that I died saved..." ====================================== saved BY someone? or FROM ourselves???? yeah I know baby...why ask why... yayaya  The ink bleeds through cuz you're paper thin |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Powerfully written. Well done. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
the ground too hard to dig for grave... "tell them all that I died saved..." She hawked pillows with her head aching promises to God. ~*~ Start teaching, poet... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Time for the book Ser... for sure! I love this.. Hugs lady~ ~ Lost in you, I found myself. ~ |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
ah...promises to God...I have found the situation is usually beyond tolerance when the promises start flowing.... will send hugs and prayers that you will find softness in your pillow and answers to your prayers |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
serenity...You're an amzazing lady, ya know?  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Phenominal! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you all so much for reading, and for taking the time to let me know that you did. It means much to me. |
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