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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving 
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh, that aches. Life doesn't wait for us, and too soon it's too late. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Dawn...  Maree. What are you my god? You touch me like you are my god What are you my twin? You affect me like you are my twin. Go Alanis! |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
very erotic picture.....hope it doesnt get you banned.........your writing is good too! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Dawn, how incredibly touching your words are ... Excellent write! Wishing you fulfillment. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
~ Beautifully written and the background artwork fits the words well. btw... nice new pic!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dawn~ The image graceful ... the tears, poignant~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Hugs dear one... Your artistic compliment was tasteful and very appropriate to the piece. Truly enjoyed. TD |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Such sorrow and longing. But sometimes little miracles do happen and the sorrow turns to joy. Susan |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
dawn , WOW |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Dawn... and I love the new pic of you!! Hugs~ ~ Lost in you, I found myself. ~ |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
Pilgrimage: oh how well i know life speeds by ..thank youMaree: its our lovely talks that conjured this one... got those memories stirring in my heart....its for you as well my friend ...thank goodness for what we DO have thoughbklynboy: hope the photo doesnt get me banned either..its actually a photo of a statue that ive digitally altered..so fingers crossed, no one gets offended. Thank you so much for reading and giving such a nice response. Margherita:thank you for all the lovely things you say...you have a sweet soul. Opeth: thank you not only for the lovely response to the poem but also for the lovely response to my new photo Marge: ah, huglets, just when i need them...thank you soooo much for being you. TD: *hugs* to you as well, you have given me many moments of joy as i read your poetry..thank you for being there so much to support mine...you are very appreciated. JamesMichael: thank you Susan: thank goodness for the miracle i already have, im much luckier than some and much happier than most. thank you for your uplifting comment. James: you are pretty WOW too my friend, thank you *hugs* enchantress: you make me grin so often, thank you, thank you, thank you *hugs* |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
quote: about a year ago I realized that if someone were to try to figure out who I am by what I write on these blue pages it might be a tough go -- most of what I put here is like my painting of Dorian Gray -- I spill my ink on selfish indulgence and then go about my merry way -- so I can relate to the keeping chin up thing... but I can still give you a for the other part that wrote this... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
A lament, yes...But lovely. And the picture? I hardly think that this image would even be discussed, much less, banned. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
Mr. Rebel: truly and sincerely, that hug is well recieved...thank you for your sensitivity wranx: thank you, sometimes i have to find beauty amongst the sadder notions to be able to cope with them. |
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MovesInSilence Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 111Perth, Australia |
Very well written buddy love the way you join words with imagery. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Dawn? more hugs I'll email you soon Get me them links..remember? Mxx P.S Keeping this btw What are you my god? You touch me like you are my god What are you my twin? You affect me like you are my twin. Go Alanis! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
this is a fine write thanks for sharing... regards sudhir |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
wow. i don't know what to say, i'll just savor it and not spoil it by thinking. -majnu |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I don't believe I've added this to my library. Maree The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Understood and heard -- this, sad, longing song. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
muted, Felt... sadly, Sadie |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Dawn, You are just amazing, such a bittersweet lament.....so many feelings captured delicately, gracefully...... `P |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
beautiful words |
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