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pictureme
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since 2003-11-28

Posts 248
Ohio, USA

0 posted 2004-05-17 11:34 PM

Reflecting
(Two Becomes One)
*
The lake is
a mirror
an art gallary
a street of busy people
a quiet place
where lovers meet
*
clear
luminous
retreat
sweet
in themselves
complete
*
floating on a boat, moving down
the long vista, an art gallary
in Van Gogh pictures
each rivals the last
in freshness, partners in time
vividness of design
*
drifting down the street
of fantasy and wonders
two dragons quarrel, with fired mouths
a doctor urges a patient
"Open, wide,
let me see your tonuge."
*
A princess bows
to brush her leafy hair
see the brush
the hand
the tresses
spilling a cascade of masses
*
And everywhere, here and there
willows lean
to kiss their own lips
a couple embrace
countless reflections
and two becomes one!
*

Alwye

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In the space between moments

1 posted 2004-05-18 12:54 PM

Very beautiful! I love the art and romance in this. Exellent.

~*Krista Lee Knutson*~

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of time like dew on the tip of a leaf.
~Rabindranath Tagore

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

2 posted 2004-05-18 04:03 AM

love the mood in this!

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

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3 posted 2004-05-18 03:35 PM

i felt wrappped around in an impressionist painting,very nice and creative

Endlessecho
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since 2003-09-05

Posts 398
I live within myself

4 posted 2004-05-18 04:59 PM

Wow. Such an original presentation. I must say this was different that I'm used to seeing and I liked that. I too felt like I was overcome by swarms of images and colors. Like Art. Like life. Beautiful!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-05-18 05:50 PM

Very beautiful...love the way your formated this.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2004-05-19 07:47 PM

A treat...James

pictureme
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since 2003-11-28

Posts 248
Ohio, USA

7 posted 2004-05-19 10:24 PM

Thanks everyone for your kind
words. You are
encouragement to ...write on!
pictureme :-)

[This message has been edited by pictureme (05-19-2004 11:05 PM).]

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