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Blue Skies of Night
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Blue Skies of Night |
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mrmojorisin5908 Member
since 2004-05-03
Posts 103Colorado |
Streets can be of gold But to the one who is cold Is a falsity among love Of rocking cries above night The city comes and goes But you stay a long while Across the plume, the great mile Ahead is the light we follow Among blue skies come the cries Of a heart that doesn’t belong In the body and out of the skin The blue bottle may arise Coming on down the blue skies |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
The city comes and goes But you stay a long while Across the plume, the great mile Ahead is the light we follow  grand write , super images too thanks for sharing -wolfmon J |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Very enjoyable first post. Please take the time to have a look around at all the forums we have to offer. Read, reply to others work, and most of all, have fun! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Lost in you, I found myself. ~ |
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mrmojorisin5908 Member
since 2004-05-03
Posts 103Colorado |
I was just kinda wondering if anyone is strictly a free verse poet here? I don't mean to limit my writing I just feel that i convey my thoughts better with free verse. Is anyone else? -andrew Andrew A. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Welcome to Passions, you will find many different styles of poetry within these pages, and I hope you find this place as welcome a venue as I have |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I often ponder blue skies of night... enjoy the read. ~Tier |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Andrew~ WELCOME to Passions' circle of poets and friends~ I enjoyed the imagery in your post~ We have many, many "free versers" here ... take a look at Martie ... she is one of the bestest there is~ Share some of your free verse with us~ I am a 'rhymer' by nature .. but venture into whatever ink my quill gifts me with~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hi Andrew Welcome to Passions! I liked your first post and I reckon you should write in whichever way you like. You will find so many different styles here. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Welcome to Passions. I hope that you enjoy it here as much as we all do. And, write however you feel. There are some of all different forms here and in the archives. I hope that you enjoy yourself. Hugs, Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Welcome to Passions!  any verse is good verse here! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
 i enjoyed the imagery in this, and i think free verse is great  hope to see more of you |
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jennirey Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 198North Richland HillsTx |
ENCORE!!! This was fabulous!!!! Welcome to passions |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
Welcome! I also like free verse, but I have never gotten any good at it. Would like to one day. quatro |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Welcome to PIP! I liked this and will watch for your next one! |
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GlisteningRain Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 103The clouds |
Loved the poem and M...If you mean by freeverse just off the top of your head. That works for me also. In fact most of the poetry I'll be writing here will be off the top. Softly fading in memories tread a galaxy of nothing never-ending but beautiful.. like lilies hope hot without flare inside a furnace of blue passion. Sincerely, B |
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