Open Poetry #32 |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Two Within the impatient sea I travel, looking for the shine of your eyes. I am the sea rolling off the shore, pounding impatiently. Seeking out not knowing what I should see. The line of the shore cannot hold me. Wind and ocean I shall be. At the door of the sea. At depth, you and me. In the tide I will hide, In the blue sea, You are me. Me - you, Two. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JL~ This is just totally beautiful~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
pretty write |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Even the presentation here was that of the melodic waves. Nicely done. TD |
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