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Pouring Metaphors
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Pouring Metaphors |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Pouring Metaphors Metaphors pour minds explore As Seymour holds the open door And candelabras flicker light Dancing phantoms in the night They show in moves of mist on mist A sophist in a word of twist Ever sifting poems of rhyme To ride upon the crest of time It is a magic carpet ride With symbol oars to work the tide Making whirl pools in the sand Upon the soil of Samarkand He walks the nether world of ID Opening up Pandora’s lid And there he finds the ebb of tide To circumvent the flow of pride It’s there he finds his guiding star To guide him to his Shangri-la |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
YES--you are our morning mug of mocha-metaphor -- our cup of cadenced cappuccino.  Our daily dose of rhymes divine with wisdom on the side.  ( and lest us not forget -- Randy is our raspberry tea) LOL *ww*    |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
what would we indeed do, without our magic carpets? Isn't it great Sy...traveling that way...less costly fuel, no fumes...and, no inspections needed...smiles Excellent write my friend. Good morning kind sir...wishing you and yours a great day, and a wonderful weekend...it's going to be a beaut out here in PA. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, smiling smiling am I! Do it again!  |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Many vivid images, especially the third stanza. Much enjoyed. Maggie |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, I love your rhymes and metaphors, and always look forward to them. Hugs, Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Big morning smiles and hugs for this one Sy!! Love it! Have a great weekend!
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Morning! Loved this mucho! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
maybe I should explore the ID you quite often write about interesting subject indeed...haven't thought about it since college psychology |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Shall we dip Randy and have some tea? WWRS LeeJ Good morning sweet and I'm glad you're having a nice day. Sunshine Keeping you smiling is what I do. Maggie, Thanks for the read and enjoy. Ethel, Thanks and hugs back. Nancy, Will do my best about the weekend. Hugs Susan, Glad you liked. passing, Just take a good supply of candles. LOL |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Well. You sweet witchy thang you! Very enchanting chant you've penned, sy. and yay, I get to hug the cuddlebear again! missed ya honey! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, Not only that but Randy too. LOL |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You keep pouring ... I'll keep reading by the cup full~ You are quite wonderful, sir poet~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, That's funny I think the same of you. |
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