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RMW
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since 2001-03-21

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0 posted 2004-04-29 05:16 PM

To Fill the Hollow

Simply put,
it involves some sort of thermodynamic process
wherein molecules of water vapor collect on dust particles.
Before that, generally in a meadow, on a clear night,
when stars are thick above a hilltop,
heat escapes from the earth's surface
in an amount sufficient
to wrap the couple in a blanket.
Once condensed, the moist air
slips into the valley.
In the morning her ankles chill
as they hurry through it.

RMW

dingusjr
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since 2003-09-24

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Missouri

1 posted 2004-04-29 05:19 PM

I will admit I wish I had written this...
very unusual.

RMW
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since 2001-03-21

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2 posted 2004-04-29 05:25 PM

dingusjr ... thank you for taking a moment to read and comment. Bob

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-04-29 06:13 PM

I've seen those mists come in...
a lovely write, Robert...

another, please?

Martie

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4 posted 2004-04-29 06:21 PM

Bob.......how sweet is that!

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

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Michigan, USA

5 posted 2004-04-29 08:35 PM

So authentic and unique in presentation.
Delightful.
TD

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

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east coast

6 posted 2004-04-30 12:39 PM

Good to read you again, Robere.

*smiles*

~Tier

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

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state of confusion

7 posted 2004-04-30 01:16 PM

Bob,

Hello, old friend, hope all is well with you and yours!

I like the weaving of science with the heart; it shows the talents of a poet with skills in both the real and the poetic.

Corinne

RMW
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since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

8 posted 2004-04-30 01:26 PM

Sunshine, Martie, TD, Tiersdin and Corinne ........ thank you all for the kind words. I'm pleased that you took a moment. Bob

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

9 posted 2004-04-30 02:42 PM

and that is how it's done

yes

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2004-04-30 03:06 PM

Robert~
This is about as lovely as they come~
And the title ... a beautiful WELCOME mat, that bids me enter~

So good to see you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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