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Open Poetry #32

Miracle Of Birth

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

0 posted 2004-04-29 08:35 AM

I rinsenight from my eyes,
watch as a deluge of icy
crystals whirl and settle
into soft mounds,

silence broken only
by squabbling birds scratching
Winter’s crust for sustenance

their vee shaped claws the only
imprint on virgin smoothness
soon to be covered by softly
falling feathery dew.

The blushing breast of a robin
almost lost in the blood red fingertips
of the holly tree, watchful as the
ravens swoop near.

My thoughts with are with
Spring bringing
the miracle ofbirth.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2004-04-29 09:04 AM

Beautiful perception of Spring!
Love, Margherita

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-04-29 09:05 AM

Yes!!! Beautiful beautiful words you have written here.
Hugs~

~I love you - those three words have my life in them.~

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

3 posted 2004-04-29 09:25 AM

Ah, Spring...as I sit here in a Colorado snow storm. Thanks for the read.

INclan

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2004-04-29 09:41 AM

So mellow in tone and texture...
Enjoyed
TD

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2004-04-29 12:22 PM

This is a really pretty poem.
O enjoyed reading it.

Hugs,
Ethel

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

6 posted 2004-04-29 01:19 PM

Magharita thank you so much. Maggie

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

7 posted 2004-04-29 01:23 PM

I'm glad that you like it Enchantress. Maggie

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

8 posted 2004-04-29 01:25 PM

Same here i Btitain Inclan Thank for replying. Maggie

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

9 posted 2004-04-29 01:30 PM

Thank you for reading T.D. Maggie

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

10 posted 2004-04-29 01:32 PM

I appreciate your reply Ethel Maggie

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