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Open Poetry #32

Feeling Touch!

pictureme
Member

since 2003-11-28

Posts 248
Ohio, USA

0 posted 2004-04-26 11:08 PM

Feeling Touch
*
M. Freeman
*
I took his hand in mine,
pressed and caressed.
I held his,
as mine was held.
stroked his knuckles,
his palms,
then realized
the finger I lightly traced
was mine.
how strange to touch,
such tenderness.
*

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2004-04-26 11:34 PM

very surprising and nice. Joyce

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2004-04-27 12:01 PM

LOL This had a surpise ending.
I liked it.

Hugs

Ethel

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-04-27 12:24 PM

Very nice write! !

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2004-04-27 07:07 AM

Very nice M. Freeman
Sometimes when I touch a newborns skin I feel no tactile sensation, my fingers are to rough I guess, but I know they are brailing something, something tender and spiritual, such as is this poem...
enjoyed
-------ice
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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2004-04-27 10:07 AM

I guess we can surprise ourselves with the slightest of touch...

nice

M

pictureme
Member

since 2003-11-28

Posts 248
Ohio, USA

6 posted 2004-05-25 10:41 PM

Thanks everyone and strange but touching
you always touches me!
pictureme :-)

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