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Becoming Another!
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Becoming Another! |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
Becoming Another M. Freeman * Don't envy me as my belly grows and baby wakes and dreams its so * I won't envy you able to be outside of it to watch me, watch you, under cover becoming another's. * |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This was striking in its hard fact. Oh so vividly painful. Well written. TD |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
pictureme...very interesting and well done! |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This is just beyond words here!  Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
Thanks all for your comments. This is an old, revisited and revised poem that is close to my heart! pictureme :-) |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
pictureme, Don't mind as I pictureyou! See now I enjoyed that. Probably not envy but a lot of joy in the process. Very well done. So will you do it again?  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nicely done! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good imagery here... enjoyed very much! |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
Thanks for your responses. This was a long ago write, tweeked just a little keeping the message in tact! pictureme :-) |
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