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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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Solid, unbroken, strong, bold, not shallow, Sweet to taste, a chocolate dipped marshmellow? Take one bite, poisoness I am not, love poisons the heart, Upon your lips I melt, flavoring your tongue, senations are felt, Hungry, you desire more, wanting, eating, your heart is full, Am I your candy store? No I am not, I am solid, unbroken, strong, bold, not shallow, Why do I feel so hollow? Read the sign, candy store closed, new management, redesign, Used book store coming soon, stories, deep conversation, inside the heart, the study room, I am more than a candy store! A whole lot more... just step oustside, of your child hood world, Open the door... Open your eyes, your mind, see the complete woman, standing in front of you, Don't live life blind! Besides, too much candy... gives you a belly ache. Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very fine poem..stripped down to exactly where you want....the new store...when does it open?....thank you.... Goldenrose. ''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
(Oh, I was eating a solid chocolate Easter bunny while writing this and thought of how I din't like the hollow ones that look solid, but are empty) I think today is Grand opening day....LOL! Thank You! and by the way...I think there is a whole mall in there...very versatile. I'm every woman....rolled into one... Love and hugs ~ARH  (This was for all the men who only look at women as sex objects, not seeing deeper than meets the eye! or should I say the heart?)(not toward you Goldenrose in anyway..because your heart is the opposite of that) Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...ouch...James |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Unfortunately for you dear lady, beauty more often blinds us, than helps us see. I know truly that it is not all there is that's worthy in a woman, and may in fact be the least part of her. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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