Open Poetry #32 |
No, I Am Not Above It |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
No, I Am Not Above It sad good byes are hard for me my fingers stick to things I do not want to let go of lingering my skin aches from remembrances and my mind won’t let me escape drowning in thought but there is a place where I float in salt |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Such powerful writing Helen...you always leave me long in thought. Eric |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlick~ I have yet to read ANYTHING from you that has not 'stuck with me'~ This does ... and for that I thank you AGAIN~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
And anyone who didn't wouldn't be worth their salt... amen Helen |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
enjoyed floating along with you on this one |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
H, you have a way with words and metaphors..you spin me around and let me see the other side. Amazing. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"there is a place I float in salt" Wow, what a line! ...jo |
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