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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan 
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free in the air a molecule i am just a speck in the night have you noticed me i am here in front of your mind your eyes are reading me words for emotions , a fair trade the trappers are jealous skills are learned not given in time so keep listening closely and then you will have achieved it the anything you have always wanted in life its there , right here go ahead and approach me grasp my fine handles made of jade raise me above to the map of eternity our beautiful sky the perfect creation , a splendid personification come over to the fire , sit beside the shaman my feathers and special stones around you now release the pressure settled beneath your brain its there wishing for you its your choice to make the chances go fast in this rotating orbit earth awake from the haze of artificial everything the land is still here to guide you back we are in eden , we are in hell it is one swirling whirlpool of sparkling light leave the fear of being alive behind it is time to be who you have always been James D Wolf III 4/24/2004 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh wow! this speaks volumes to me right now! thank you! |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Anytime babe   |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
it is one swirling whirlpool of sparkling light leave the fear of being alive behind it is time to be who you have always been You say it! Wonderful. Love, Margherita |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Excellent write! |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
you say it so well awesome write provoking thoughts as well....  ~~**~~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
There were too many excellent lines to copy, but one radiant write embraced and captured. Exponentially Brilliant JW... Will be back for another helping, I am sure TD |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
I keep reading it over and over again...each time more entranced in the words than the last... Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A very interesting write! ~ and I mean "interesting" in the most positive of manners! "awake from the haze of artificial everything the land is still here to guide you back" ~ Absolutely!!! Warm hugs and smiles, EA |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
I am makin my way through this overgrown trail , climbing a small mountain step by step , day by day, pushing onward that leads to the peak of the world peace to all who have the guts to take control of there lives be strong and compassionate patience and desire love eachother oh oh oh how sweet and fine latta -wolf |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Couldn't help but respond to your reply... There is a seed inside us all that flourishes...it isn't triggered by an age, or even time itself... That divine calling...that purpose that aches until it is fed...that is freedom for sure. The more I read this, the more inspired I became. You are a good listener JDW. TD |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"leave the fear of being alive behind it is time to be who you have always been" Exactly! Great writing. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes yes release......... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent excellent write... very thought provoking..and much enjoyed. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
Yes ~simply~ Yes |
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