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Feathered Tones |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Feathered Tones Spirit birds with feathered tones Echoes fly with hollowed bones Bouncing written stones of rise Crying out their awesome cries Sailing winds of sallies course Rallying a gray remorse Breaking sates of echoes wear Making weight of nothing there I know not why the phantoms ride There is no stride that I can hide They wear away the stones and bones With pounding echoes overtones And in the storm that plunders me I rue upon a stormy sea The thwart is hid beneath dark clouds And I am caught in hanging shrouds I cannot subtle, wear and tear Nor rebuttal the bones I bear |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
There was nothing hollow about this write except it allowed you to fly. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! You swept me up with this morning write Sy! Ready for your tea? ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Should thy spirited bird thus fly by words following windy currents just to be heard know, Sire, true, that I would to heart heed not only the words, but those of your need... ~*~ You always inspire, my friend... always. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
phantoms ride just that inch of prose is a window my friend you make walls of glass with your words |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Spirit birds with feathered tones Echoes fly with hollowed bones Bouncing written stones of rise Crying out their awesome cries Sailing winds of sallies course Rallying a gray remorse Breaking sates of echoes wear Making weight of nothing there ===================================== somebody get me a mountain top so I can yell from its peak.... YOURE SOOOO KEWL!!!!!!!!  Sybabers....ya make me moth giddy with your rhymes of way cool...reading this aloud was poetry in motion...you are me King of Cadence.  I cannot subtle, wear and tear Nor rebuttal the bones I bear oh but I love those bones.    |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Good Morning Sy: Found myself just smiling and shaking my head yes. Good work. TD |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kethry Nice, thank you my friend. Nancy, WOW and tea, suits me. Lady, You shine on my parade. Hugs Dark Stranger Thank you, enjoyed your comment. JM, For you I have nothing but winkies, hugs and kisses. Randy and I have pooled our sauces and made them in courses.  ThisDiamond Good work is just the touch I needed. Hugs |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thank you good afternoon |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, I know that I've probably told you before, but no matter what your subject matter, your rhyme is always written with perfection,. I love it!! Hugs, my friend, Ethel |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
outstanding form today Sy, this was a lovely read especialy ... I know not why the phantoms ride There is no stride that I can hide They wear away the stones and bones With pounding echoes overtones Thank you for writing and sharing |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, I thank you sweet. Ethel, You can never tell me enough. LeeJ Thank you for the reading and comments. Hugs and good morning |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
gentle, flowing, sweeping emotions  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
muted Wonderful comment, thank you. |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
"They wear away the stones and bones With pounding echoes overtones" -- I absolutely love that. This whole poem has a great beat to it and moves you through the emotions. Wonderful. ~*Krista Lee Knutson*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Alwye And you move me with your response, thank you. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Fantastic Seymour...love the flow of this and the imagery. Maree What are you my god? You touch me like you are my god |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
chilling perfection  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Awesome read. Fast tempo. Excellent! JL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Angel Thank you my friend. iliana You flatter me. JL Delighted you liked it. |
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