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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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...she left her window open... Reprised rendition solo play tickling ivory she sings the blues low, throaty with a scat of moans soft cry of, ‘why not me’ seems the clouds understand feel her pain... Thundering with an audible ache matching her tune and together ....they rain ~SEA~ |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
a fitting pair . . . (tho there might be a less expected line than "tickling ivory") Kraw' |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"with an audible ache matching her tune and together ....they rain" Beautiful Susan. Such an ache..a longing. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LOL I couldn't think of what you would say about playing the piano...I don't play...  sorry about that..... Thanks Nancy  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
soft cry of, ‘why not me’ seems the clouds understand feel her pain... Thundering Oh SEA gal, I have missed your poetry more than you'll ever know! This aches, but is so true to form, and so pretty~ |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Sea, I like how you tied in the low throaty voice with the sound of thunder. It is a powerful image. Enjoyed. Sadelite |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
perfect harmony.....I sense this runs a little deeper between the words.... ~~**~~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Susan...this is so very beautiful! I could HEAR this one! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
and the "soft cry of"... yes, that's it, Sea nice to see more of you *s M |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
This made me think of me, with my windows open during a storm.. Rain alone is poetry. Lovely poem |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SEA A delicious write. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A perfect fit Sea. It is soooo good to read you again hon! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent write. Very soothing read. Felt the blues in this. JL |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A very good poem describing the blues... they rain/they reign. Yes! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
this is lovely, SEA! Corinne |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
I could hear the lowest octave E Major chord being pounded out with a leas melody fingered as the storm clouds roared. Enjoyed! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
sometimes I wonder where I am... my muse has deserted me... and often I wonder why not me then I see your pic and then I wonder why not me and SEA...  Thanks for remembering me I peek in once and a while hoping to find my muse, I need some kind of distant inspiration Like a soft palable tattoo to get my imaginatin working. Parker I am currently off sanding my boat! |
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