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Some Day |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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I’m looking forward to a time when I can return all mail and shop only with cash, when I can cancel my checking account, grow my own produce, live off the grid, donate my dry-clean-only clothing and uncomfortable shoes, sell anything tied to a monthly payment, clean out the clutter, cash out the 401K’s, skip doctor appointments and chuck pill bottles, sleep all day if I want, do yoga like a pro, ignore idiots of the world, take public transportation and leave my car in the road, to let my hair grow out gray and pluck my tweezers from the drawer into the trash; when it all becomes clear and I laugh, full from the joke of looking back. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
wish you luck my friend... neat write...enjoyed. I'm looking forward to that to. jwesley |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
when it all becomes clear and I laugh, full from the joke of looking back. ~*~ Gads...I love you!!!! please please please.... let me go that lane with you. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
When that day comes, and it will, I'll be looking back and laughing with you. But, I'll hold off on letting my hair go gray, for now.  Much enjoyed, Corinne~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Great write, and Corinne -- that is a worthy goal! I am letting my hair grow out gray....haven't quit getting bills yet though. lol  ....jo |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is funny. I loved it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks JWesley! Awww, Karilea, I love 'ya too! Yep, lets prance down that lane without a care! I grow so tired of all the trappings!  Thanks Blues! That will be the hardest, letting the hair go. But one day, it will be either that or a blue rinse, heaven forbid! Thanks Iliana! I suppose it's a wish for the kind of freedom we can't possibly know here on earth. Thanks Loner! Corinne |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
What's this doing way back here? Well Corinne, it seems I've accomplished (or had accomplished TO me) most of your list...except for the yoga and that car thing ..LOL. So, I know what you mean. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sounds like a plan to me |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
You have been highly recommended to me, and I see why. Great philosphy here and well written too. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sounds like my first apartment and yanno? I really was happier there. loved this Corinne |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Corrine, go for it, it's easier than you think (the hair, that is), take my word for it.  Ya might take some guff for a bit, but they get used to it. |
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BabieDoll Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268BFE |
Great poem... ~J.Lynn  There is not ONE person in this world that you cannot live without. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Some Day reminds me of "When my ship comes in..." Enjoyed this a lot. miscellanea |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is Great Corinne, love it all, but I doubt I could get used to letting my hair grow out grey. Wonderful from you as always Maree. The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
This brings a smile. Bob |
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