Open Poetry #32 |
A Mused Visit |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There sit the journals One for each grandchild. What are you waiting for? Write in them. I would, but What? I am afraid of my mistakes. Get over it! ~*~ I feel – disconnected. You wrote before you typed Yes, but – I recognize my fallacies In my handwriting. ~*~ What is your best characteristic? Love. What is your worst flaw? Sigh. Love. ~*~ You recently wrote of procrastination. Yes What happened afterwards? I put it behind me, and started afresh Are you ready to fail now? Yes What if it is a success, this venture? If it is a success, it will be so only in some minds Not all minds? No. Then why proceed? Because it’s a positive failure if I don’t. They why proceed? Because I must. ~*~ Are you connected now? Only when I hit “submit”. ~*~ And Rainer laughs from the window ledge... P.S. smiles, and Frances...just nods her head. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Are you connected now? Only when I hit “submit”." Great line, so true! I think I need a visit from Rainer, too! lol! I so enjoy your ponderings, Sunshine! ........jo |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Love it! Love it! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Are you connected now? Only when I hit “submit”. Yup great line and my favourite. that's one of the things I love about ya Karilea, you come out from all different directions and that's a good thing. Maree The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Much enjoyed this one, Kari. Sandra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This is awesome...you could have been talking to me as well....do I ever know the feeling. Fallacies in handwriting??????????????????????? Wait just a cottonpickin' minute....I have seen your handwriting, and it is beautiful... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! and I love the new picture too |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Rainer sounds like a treasure, he's a real keeper...smiles and hugs...very much related to this one. Thank you and have a great weekend. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well I am most assuredly pleased that you "hit submit" with this one!!! I was muy amused with your musings! ~ Rainy, summer morning hugs from up here in the north country! Linda |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
I only know that when "submit" is idle, so are we. You are such a pleasure to read. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea Loved this!! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!!!!! Eric |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I recognize that voice!!! As Nike says..."Just do it" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
LOL@Duncan! Love this! Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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