Open Poetry #32 |
Dolphin |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Picture by Jim Warren * * * I swim beneath the ocean Amongst waves of deepest green This place is ever changing With so much beauty to be seen I travel beside large vessels As I guide them out to sea I am playful and intelligent Many humans befriend me And throughout the dead of night You'll hear the whales' mournful cry As the moon shines like a beacon And the stars light up the sky All too soon the night will end As dawn brings her morning light But for now I'll disappear Beneath the covers of the night I am in motion I am blue Love is an ocean I'm anchored in you - Shawn Mullins |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Suetang -- this was so lovely. Daulphins are a wonder to me, too. .....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh...you know I love this! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sue, I loved it! As you may have noticed, my icon is a dolphin ~ and I feel as though I am part dolphin myself! ~ mind you, my nose and mouth are much smaller! lol ~ A delightful read! ~ and a Huggums, The "angel" dolphin, Linda |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Sue, such an uplifting soft tone, yet filled with many images taking the reader for a float...tranquil and very beautiful. Happy Weekend to you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suetang A delight to read. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
What a beautiful poem...capturing a beautiful creature in it's finest light. Eric |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all for your wonderful replies. I absolutely adore dolphins and have always been fascinated by them. Take care..........Sue I am in motion |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Sue: How wonderful for you to live where you can see dolphins in the wild. Your poem is great! It makes me lonely for the ocean. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sue, I think I have a new favourite by you! And not just because I love dolphins! This is extremely beautiful and great imagery. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sue~ My end-of-day read ... the perfect poem to dream on~ BEAUTIFUL !! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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