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Hues Of Serene
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Hues Of Serene |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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 Nature sings in harmony Hues of blue painting scenes Wisp of clouds float on breeze Glimpses of ocean dreams. Sun shimmers waters edge Captures sparkles of light Colors blend shades of green Amen is said, all is right. {Thanks to Karilea for help with the graphic} It's better than I could have planned.. it's made me who I am... {Trace Adkins} |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Amen is said, all is right. ~*~ No kidding. You've got a winner, here.... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Amen to your hues of silence. I'd say everything is "all right" in that world! Lovely write! ~ Lovely YOU!  Peace & Serentiy,  Linda |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks Karilea, I couldn't have done it without you. *W* Thanks Linda. I took the pic with my phone up at one of my favorite getaways called Raystown Lake. Karilea helped me with the rest. Peaceful and serene it is indeed.... and very inspiring. Hugs. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Amen is said, all is right." Donna, I don't believe I have ever seen such a beautiful closing line anywhere! It finishes the beautiful poem and picture perfectly! ~Smiles & hugs, Nancy~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Nodding at the other's comments here Donna. Beautiful. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh sigh big sigh beautiful! |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
very nice |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Amen. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Lovely, you definitely captured a feeling of serenity. Sandra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karilea is a pro at helping....helped me too..... Love the scene, being a fisherman almost from birth....as well as what you gave us to munch on....nice words.. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Hey somy, I hope you rested lovely on the shores, or made quite a splash within...thanks for sharing your moments. Love, Reg |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Saw your name attached to this and already knew I was going to like it even without reading it . . . so, I wondered, why read it at all? Why breathe? Because I have to, because you wrote it, because I knew I'd be pleased with what I saw...and I was glad I did. jwesley |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Amen is right, Donna! ....jo |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you all so very much.... Jimmy, I have never before had any comment leave a lump in my throat such as this ...I feel like I'm finally starting to become a poet! lol... thank you my friend, so very much for that. It has been a long time since I have had a "happy" cry..... thank you....  It's better than I could have planned.. it's made me who I am... {Trace Adkins} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (07-01-2004 08:27 AM).] |
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