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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2004-06-30 10:39 AM







Nature sings in harmony
Hues of blue painting scenes
Wisp of clouds float on breeze
Glimpses of ocean dreams.

Sun shimmers waters edge
Captures sparkles of light
Colors blend shades of green
Amen is said, all is right.


{Thanks to Karilea for help with the graphic}

It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-06-30 10:42 AM


Amen is said, all is right.

~*~

No kidding.
You've got a winner, here....

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2004-06-30 10:44 AM


Amen to your hues of silence. I'd say everything is "all right" in that world!

Lovely write! ~ Lovely YOU!

Peace & Serentiy,

Linda

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3 posted 2004-06-30 10:52 AM



Thanks Karilea, I couldn't have done it without you. *W*

Thanks Linda.  I took the pic with my phone up at one of my favorite getaways called Raystown Lake.
Karilea helped me with the rest.
Peaceful and serene it is indeed....
and very inspiring.  Hugs.

Enchantress
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4 posted 2004-06-30 11:30 AM


"Amen is said, all is right."

Donna, I don't believe I have ever seen such a beautiful closing line anywhere!
It finishes the beautiful poem and picture perfectly!
~Smiles & hugs, Nancy~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

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5 posted 2004-06-30 12:14 PM


Nodding at the other's comments here Donna.
Beautiful. hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-06-30 12:34 PM


oh sigh

big sigh

beautiful!

RobertB
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7 posted 2004-06-30 05:59 PM


very nice
Susan
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8 posted 2004-06-30 07:00 PM


Amen.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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9 posted 2004-06-30 09:44 PM


Lovely, you definitely captured a feeling  of serenity.
Sandra

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10 posted 2004-06-30 09:46 PM


Karilea is a pro at helping....helped me
too.....

Love the scene, being a fisherman almost
from birth....as well as what you gave us
to munch on....nice words..

rwood
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11 posted 2004-06-30 10:37 PM


Hey somy, I hope you rested lovely on the shores, or made quite a splash within...thanks for sharing your moments.

Love,
Reg

jwesley
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12 posted 2004-06-30 10:44 PM


Saw your name attached to this and already knew I was going to like it even without reading it . . . so, I wondered, why read it at all?

Why breathe?

Because I have to, because you wrote it,
because I knew I'd be pleased with what I saw...and I was glad I did.

jwesley

iliana
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13 posted 2004-06-30 10:45 PM


Amen is right, Donna!   ....jo
Gentle Spirit
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14 posted 2004-07-01 07:48 AM


Thank you all so very much....

Jimmy, I have never before had any comment leave a lump in my throat such as this ...I feel like I'm finally starting to become a poet!  lol...
thank you my friend, so very much for that. It has been a long time since I have had a "happy" cry.....
thank you....


It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (07-01-2004 08:27 AM).]

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