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Release (rictameter inspired by Serenity)
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Release (rictameter inspired by Serenity) |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach 
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 . . Release letting go of soul's gentle departure loosen the ties that had us bound unclench angry fist filled with pain and doubt free to roam with life's leash unhooked acquit self guilt and shame breathe out ... breathe in ... Release . . . Chris Barker June 2004 ~~~~~~~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful and wonderfully inspired Chris. Love this one very much! ~Hugs, love and miss ya, Teed~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I only wish it were so easy |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Nancy Lee - thankyou and I miss and luv ya too.  Dixiedoodledandygirl - heaven just sent me a message, and the angels would like to hear you smile in your words. Can ya? Will ya try? It makes the clouds less grey so that the angels can keep better watch on us. Thankyou sweets! |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
sweetness  Victims....aren't we all. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Inspiration wel received, m'dear... you gave both serenity, and maureen, honor and respect. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Beautiful Chrislane |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
One of my favorite roses along with one of my favorite rose's lovely petals of words. :hugs .......jo |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Snow, Karilea & Sharon, thankyou so much. Your comments make me feel good! Hugs! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
ooops! iliana my poet friend! you snuck in there. Thankyou for your lovely words.  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is beautifully done, Chris. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Would you look at this? I could never do these yanno. and yes, yes, you read and you understood, and that is such a gift sweet friend. Thank you Chrislane...you are a cherished soul, much dear to me.  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Wise words well written. SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Lovingly written with great gentleness. Well done!! Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
soul's gentle departure loosen the ties that had us bound =========================== beautiful Chris...the poem and its sincerety. well done. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thanks with Hugs to all of you!! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I wished you lived next door that is what I wish. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"breathe out ... breathe in ... Release" every word so lovely...and so well inspired |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sharon - I wish we lived closer as well, thankyou so much. muted - whenever you comments on my writings I am thrilled. Thankyou! |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
A wonderful form. Your words do lift the spirit dear poetess, and you picked a great artist to accompany your wings. Love, Reg |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Chris, I began taking notice of my breathing as I read your words ~ and I experienced "release"... Thank you.  Linda |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Chris, reading this made me feel like I've just meditated with spring breezes and open air symphony. Such a pleasant poem given to us from your wise heart. Lovely rhythum. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Chris~ Oh you did good! Very good... "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
don't know what a "rictameter" is (guess I've never cared enough to find out or try one - especially if I have to think) but I do know this is wonderful and I would have like to have written it myself, yet I'm glad you did it because I could not have done it so beautifully. jwesley |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
What a nice surprise first thing this morning! More poet friends reading and commenting. As Serenity would say, "gleeeeee" Thankyou All!! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
A beautiful rictameter, Chris. And a very swet subject, too. :heartL Hugs, Ethel |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Aww..thankyou Ethel. hugs! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Chris, I just came back ... to this! WOW! I luv it! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome home Interloper! Thankyou so much. |
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