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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Search and Look I touch and feel along the way And search and look beyond my stay I conjure up a castles keep With mortar of my tears of weep I charge into each night of store Searching for the evermore Place a rose upon its lace And see in it your lovely face But each new morn eludes the will The distance does not change but still Desires fire lights the goal I cannot stop my hungry soul Is it a myth of generate A moment of incorporate Or is it but illusions mime That juggles with the sands of time I seek to see around the bend Or do I wish desires end? |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
But each new morn eludes the will The distance does not change but still Desires fire lights the goal I cannot stop my hungry soul Yes, isn't that how we all are at times... Is it a myth of generate A moment of incorporate Or is it but illusions mime That juggles with the sands of time No, it is but a moment of time, which sometimes gives us so many options and opportunities. Good Morning Sy my friend...lovely smooth write, very much enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I charge into each night of store Searching for the evermore Place a rose upon its lace And see in it your lovely face" How lovely this reads Sy! Good sunny morning to you! Time for a cup of tea with me? ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Much wisdom in your words Sy. Well written. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If that keen desire were to end? Would that mean, no words would bend? Methinks I could not bear the thought, of a pen held aloft, in dry rot... ~&~ Keep the desire, hold fast the muse...   |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I charge into each night of store Searching for the evermore Place a rose upon its lace And see in it your lovely face Beautiful piece to ponder this sunny Tuesday. Thankyou for this Seymour. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
So, Sir T., I say unto thee: Desire keeps one's soul afire! Keep on dreaming and build a pyre! The heat will keep your spirits high! So shoot your flames up to the sky! EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
incredible....how you do it every day...like clockwork |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"I charge into each night of store Searching for the evermore Place a rose upon its lace And see in it your lovely face But each new morn eludes the will The distance does not change but still Desires fire lights the goal I cannot stop my hungry soul" Sy, I do believe you've hit this one...true center.  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Me thinks ye still be a seeker and your pen, the desire's speaker! ....jo |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Desires fire lights the goal I cannot stop my hungry soul This is excellent, my friend... and however aggravating it may be at times to never sip from total satisfaction, I think those who never lose the hunger are the lucky ones. *S* Granted... a few extra feedings from that cup of satiation would be nice??? LOL |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Is it a myth of generate A moment of incorporate Or is it but illusions mime That juggles with the sands of time ============================= Those two couplets are cooler than I will have words for... "myth of generate" "illusions mime" you are too cool for school...thats why youre the teach.  you see beyond the bend and will write the end me sweet Sy.  *ww*   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Your comments are always a pleasure to read. Nancy, Of course my dear, hugs. scorpio Thank you my friend. Sunshine It seems I have no choice. LOL Hugs Chris, A pleasure to send hugs back. Earth Angel Gotcha, hugs. passing, I bought a clock. LOL hugs Duncan I shall take the arrow and frame it. LOL iliana, I think you got it right. LOL hugs suthern, I'm in total agreement. Kisses and hugs JM, Golly Gee I love your replies. WWRS |
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