Open Poetry #32 |
The Persistence of Vision |
miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Persistence of Vision In the corner sat Grandma’s button box flirting with its double lids, “Open me now for I can overwhelm you with simplicity although you’re merely kids.” Having nothing better to do on the stuck-there day, I lifted one lid, and she the other. Inside were button jewels and rhinestone hatpins, colored threads removed from worthless dress hems. For hours our hands were cupped in swim of the treasures held like fresh shelled corn. Each button was eyed to examine its worth then placed in categories never planned; A never ending sort At last, when all the squares, oval, brass had found a pile, we turned to thread. On it we placed the medallion. It was a necklace, but if spun could be observantly read to tell of time All you need is button and string, a reflective moment, A spirited swing; How many buttons do you see? Can you make two spin as one? Can you make time stand still? Imagine, with kid simplicity… The persistence of vision [This message has been edited by miscellanea (06-27-2004 02:47 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! This sure brought back a lot of memories! I so much enjoyed your entrance post. Looking forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"For hours our hands were cupped in swim of the treasures that lay like fresh shelled corn. Each button was eyed to examine its worth Placed in categories never planned; A never ending sort" for me it was my mom's big button jar.... I loved this.... welcome |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
miscellanea This brought back some wonderful memories for me...thank you..a lovely poem..very nostalgic. Welcome to Passions! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome Poet: The joy of the button box is dear to my heart...making something out of nothing. In my case, there was an old cigar stand in the room...brass interior and two doors that opened to a childs imagination. We created furniture, and I found nurturing and the existence of timeless joy. Well done. ThisDiamond |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Thank you, Enchantress. It's nice to be here. miscellanea Sea, Glad you liked that part. Poetically, it's my favorite, but my really favorite is the optical illusion of being able to make time stand still. Martie, I'm glad you enjoyed the nostalgia. Thanks for stopping by. This Diamond, I've read some of your poetry. Now I know a little bit about from where your creativity has sprung. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
It wasn't even too long ago. I was there, too... sitting by Grandma as she made her quilt. She showed me how to hold the string and place the button there. I'd play for hours and hours. You're right, time did stand still... I wonder why I ever stopped, because time started again the second I did. Thank you for bring back the memories and for sharing this great poem! Welcome to the blue pages Always, Alyssa Poems are made by fools like me, |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
It's amazing, the power of the button box. Even today I love looking at buttons. And my nine year old daughter too has discovered Grandma's button box. Much enjoyed, and welcome. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
An intriguing nostalgic write -- for it not only brings back memories of the button box but all those boxes in my grandmother's junk closets that I used to rummage through. lol hugs, jo [This message has been edited by iliana (06-26-2004 10:49 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
precious |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
Welcome to Passions! what a wonderful entrance sometimes its the simplest of things that brings about the most amazing sensations and innovations |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome to the Passion's family Much enjoyed your first post !! Have fun here Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This particular poem has a great deal of meaning for me. One of these days, I shall tell you about it. For now? A very warm welcome to Passions! Please check your e-mail for a very Special Greeting! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
As Bob Hope used to sing, "Thanks for the memories..." I used to do the very same thing with both of my grandmothers' and with my mother's, button boxes! I started my own as well when I was still quite young and continue to add to my "boxes". My daughters used to play with those buttons and have since started their own! It has become a family tradition! You successfully brought science and poetry together! This was a delightful read! ~ and by the way, we all have had fun with the thread and button tricks! lol A wonderful write! Warm, welcoming hugs, Earth Angel |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
You are all so kind. I'm sure I will like it here a lot. Thank you, Everyone. miscellanea |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This was nicely crafted, and brought back so many fond memories as well. Welcome to Passions, miscellanea~ |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Thanks, Blues Serenade. It's nice to be here. ~miscellanea~ |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
Miscellanea, I found your poem to be delightfully visual and entertaining. You painted a simply wonderful moment that suggests a mostalgic pastime that I am not familiar with. Yet, through your careful construction I am able to see and feel that which you speak of so eloquently. Your talent evident throughout your poem. It was simply a delicious example of well-written verse worthy of praise. Thank you so much for sharing your work here with us. You are most welcome here as I have been since entering these halls several weeks ago. I look forward with anticipation to reading future posts authored by you. Warm regards and solidarity to you always. Kevin |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Kevin, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for your positive comments. miscellanea |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is absolutely wonderful... welcome to Passions! *S* I'm not sure which I appreciate more... the wonderful memories you evoked... or the incredible talent you displayed in this write... but I'll definitely be looking for more of your work!! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Thanks, suthern, That's really touching to read. I appreciate your thoughts. miscellanea |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
My time here is severely limited, but there are some people I make it a point to read whenever I see their name on something...after the first poem of yours that I read, I knew you were one of them....this is the second, and yep, no doubt about it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
A pretty composition which brought back lovely memories of my mother in her youth, and how she not only tried to keep our imaginations busy, but to also spend time with us. Thank you |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Ratleader, You're mucha too kind. Thank you. miscellanea LeeJ. I'm pleased this has brought good memories of your mother. Thanks. miscellanea |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Welcome bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
thanks, bernie. It's a pleasure to be here. |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
perhaps im not quite old enough yet to remember those things but nonetheless...great first post Victims....aren't we all. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome! This is such a charming write, one that reminded me of a similar precious moment long ago. |
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