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mrmojorisin5908
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since 2004-05-03
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0 posted 2004-06-28 07:44 PM


Stuck away in high devotion
You are the heigth of my emotion
1000 miles away and it feels that way
Endless love is hard when you can't touch
Although, I can feel your soul
When both are connected it makes a whole
For this time that we are apart
Don't forget me in the wind
Because you are my angel
That carries me through life
You are the eternal light burning in my heart
Start where we began and it doesn't end
Pretend, pretend we are both present
Love is like an evil priest
It's amazing and it contradicts
I can't wait till I come to you
Because I'll see your glittered hair
Your piercing and forgiving eyes
You'll take me away and show me he day
And I'll be the one to stop time
Torn between a kiss and a tear
But when it stops it all begins

Andrew A.
"The road of excess leads to the palace of wisdom." - William Blake

© Copyright 2004 Andrew A. - All Rights Reserved
miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
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1 posted 2004-06-28 08:03 PM


mrmojorisin,
  You've got the feeling down...I love this.
          miscellanea

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