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PKreturns
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0 posted 2004-06-24 10:54 AM


I am dying a slow tortured death
One more day removed from your breath
Still there is nothing left here to do
Just waiting with arms held out for you

Time does not heal nor purify
The sun penetrates not the sky
Maybe if I put myself on the moon
I can avoid this sickened swoon

Becoming your very own sycophant
Thinking of how you did so enchant
Took possession of a starved mind
And froze me somewhere in time

There is still hope for me to hold onto yet
So I will not seethe in what if regrets
As long as I breathe it’s never too late
So I will remain in tortured wait

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1 posted 2004-06-24 01:10 PM



another awesome write from you....
glad to see you are writing more, or at least posting more


"Thinking of how you did so enchant
Took possession of a starved mind
And froze me somewhere in time

There is still hope for me to hold onto yet
So I will not seethe in what if regrets
As long as I breathe it’s never too late
So I will remain in tortured wait"

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
2 posted 2004-06-24 01:35 PM


A surround of all good and cosmic grace to you dear poet.  Time itself hold the cards of the future.
Hugs,
TD

iliana
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3 posted 2004-06-25 12:18 PM


PKreturns -- this left me with a big *sign* Nice write.  
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-06-25 05:02 AM


wow...thought-provoking
Sunshine
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5 posted 2004-06-28 07:24 PM


I like the sounds of this, PK...
very melodious to my ear...

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