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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

0 posted 2004-06-28 02:00 PM

Draw a circle around me
touch my center.
Kiss the broken parts
make them live.
Breathe me born
free of sin.
It’s not who I am
but where I’ve been

And so it is for you.

Similar circumstance
begets understanding.
How it began.
Now another season warming
bringing need
for more than what is.
Draw a circle
tell me you love me
and I will walk the rest
of this life with you.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2004-06-28 02:04 PM

He'd be a fool not to tell you that he loves you! He'd be losing a wonderful partner for life!

~ Wishing you a ring of fulfilled promises!

Linda

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

2 posted 2004-06-28 02:17 PM

It’s not who I am
but where I’ve been

And so it is for you.
Uh-huh. A timeless message, I hope it gets through. Moving stuff, susan.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-06-28 11:42 PM

Truly enjoyed.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

4 posted 2004-06-29 02:31 AM

Now I feel like going out for a stroll!!!

               I, for one, must be lousy at tying knots ...
                    ... too many moons I have walked alone.

                 Enjoyed this!    *S

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2004-06-29 08:36 AM

Thank you all!!!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

6 posted 2004-06-29 12:20 PM

"Draw a circle
tell me you love me
and I will walk the rest
of this life with you."

I really like the image I get when I read "Draw a circle" and the repetitve use of the line. Very effective Myrtle...

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

7 posted 2004-06-29 01:41 PM

very nice...

a big chief tablet and a crayon

hope that someone draws the circle well..

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

8 posted 2004-06-29 01:57 PM

Susan -- what a great way to express your feelings; terrific imagery. Loved it and hope you are enveloped in that ring of promise!

....jo

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

9 posted 2004-06-29 04:15 PM

Perfect.

Eric

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