Open Poetry #32 |
Tombs Time (for Mysteria) |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
[Note, Mysteria believes I think poetry all the time. Well, possibly. More likely? I’m just hearing voices. ] What I could not see is not what I could not hear for the whooshing hush of fire filled my veins in the cool damp of darkened tomb, a spelunker’s delight, a claustrophobe’s fear, a poet’s vision via ear dare I suggest myself a poet? Or just someone who listens? I dare the dark to show me the way. Blindly, a click, flashing light illuminating only momentarily, biopically wondering did I capture? Or only reveal? I see the mouth of horse in run, but the two-faced dragon does not scare me for the visage of the kind, both ancient and new, are there to brave its wrath and I am safe, in the care of my shadows. I bear in mind, this, my logic, just as felt words are laid down, creeping into bygone mists of yesteryear’s tomorrows. |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
YES! Need I say more? Love it! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Touche' and well done too. I do believe indeed you hear voices, because you dear lady, can whip a poem out faster than McDonalds can flip burgers! Loved these lines Karilea: a spelunker’s delight, a claustrophobe’s fear, a poet’s vision via ear dare I suggest myself a poet? Or just someone who listens? I dare the dark to show me the way. Beautiful photos and words. From your holiday? |
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Fagin Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 126Ca |
If the voices in your head are louder than everything else.......listen.. 143 |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sunshine -- YES, to what Mysteria said! I really enjoyed this (things I wonder myself sometimes). You not only hear; you see! ...jo |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes, by golly, you have captured it !!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lady..you just keep listening to those voices!! Yes!! Hugs and love ya~Nancy Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea You hear, you see, you write from inside those things, way past the appearance, into the soul. And I am so glad you do! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Most of us are clay, with as pretty a glaze on the surface as we can muster.....you're glass all the way in.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Being one of those claustrophobes, I almost skipped this one... I'm so glad I tamped the phobia temporarily... this is excellent! *S* |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
You have reached a new creative high...with a promise of even greater hights to come. Eric |
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