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Abundance of a Rich Man
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Abundance of a Rich Man |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Oh the embrace of life’s right hand With a necklace of love and truthfulness Writing them on our hearts where no love Should take refuge or hide from the nest of others For without wood, the fire disintegrates Partnerships are for giving… Were we lay like a newborn in the belly of the stars With eyes that see full generations forever There is no sleep, nor day or night…but labor And I will depart as naked as I arrived….. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Were we lay like a newborn in the belly of the stars With eyes that see full generations forever There is no sleep, nor day or night…but labor Images, emotions, hopes and realities, in so few lines. You're rich in writing abilities lady!  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Oh the embrace of life’s right hand With a necklace of love and truthfulness Writing them on our hearts where no love Should take refuge or hide from the nest of others For without wood, the fire disintegrates So pure, so true... Then, the last verse! You're writing and thoughts are so carefully chosen and developed. I truly enjoyed reading your words, Lee J. miscellanea |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love your short ones...short but very powerful |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"Were we lay like a newborn in the belly of the stars" This line is very soothing to me for some reason.... and the next.... "With eyes that see full generations forever" If the world thought ahead like this it would be a much differnt place. Perhaps we should take advice from the Lakotah and at least think seven gererations ahead? enjoyed -------ice ><> |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
"Partnerships are for giving…" yes they are.... enjoyed Bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
 You are the rich one!  ....jo |
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