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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2004-06-29 11:24 PM



My thoughts dift in and out of my mind
like the sand in a hour glass. Time slips
away to another day. They run together
forever your in my mind.

I can't escape it your captavation
holds onto me like a child holds on
to her favorite stuffed animal.

The tighter I hold the more far
away you get. I cant just think
of my thoughts and my regrets.

Foolish foolish girl I am
falling in love with a man
It feels so good It hurts so bad
sometimes I wish I just hand someone
to turn to for a kind word a gental
cry.
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Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2004-06-30 01:43 AM


I don't think loving is foolish -- we can always grow from those feelings.  I liked the hour glass analogy, foxy!  
anawnda
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since 2002-07-26
Posts 113

2 posted 2004-06-30 02:17 AM


love is pain and pleasure, it is up to us to accept the double edged-blade
Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
3 posted 2004-06-30 03:12 AM


yup its a bitch but a life without love is no life at all.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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