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Snowflake From Hell
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My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2004-06-28 12:04 PM


If I were to die would you care?
I doubt it since you made the threat to dare.
If I went crazy would you see?
Probably not you hate me.
If I was alive and well would you look,
Or would you pass a chance you might have took?
If I came up missing would you notice then,
You may end up failing too just don't know when.
If I were to die would you even notice that?
Or would you smile under your confused hat?
If I were to cry out would you come?
Or would you laugh and say I am dumb?
If I died today what would you say?
Or would you watch me die another way?
What if I weren't here tomorrow?
Would you show your sorrow?
What if I weren't here tomorrow...

Victims....aren't we all.

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-06-28 12:24 PM


I ask the same questions too
suthern
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2 posted 2004-06-29 01:27 PM


I've asked those same questions... and wallowed in the conviction there'd be barely a ripple. *S* But we all matter... somehow... in some way... to someone... even if it seems everyone else matters more. *S*
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-06-29 01:34 PM


Kyle?
C'mere and give me a hug....
Don't think those thoughts please.
Although I know we all have them at times...
You would truly be missed!!
~Big Hugs~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Nightshade
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just out of reach
4 posted 2004-06-29 02:05 PM


If one person doesn't care .... a hundred others would. So just move on and enjoy this crazy world. But, first....please get a new pic with eyes. Or maybe even draw some sunglasses on this pic? hugs, Chris
Copperbell
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5 posted 2004-06-29 02:19 PM


ditto Nightshade, Mysteria and ya I've thought all that too.

You are here for a reason you know...and it's a good reason.

A little thought for you. When I feel down and I go outside and let the sun shine on my skin and look around at the beauty that we live in, I just feel a little bit better. There have been dark days and that just seems to take the edge off.

Take care

Snowflake From Hell
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My own little Icey Oblivion
6 posted 2004-06-29 02:44 PM


blah ill manage i always do...and i hate the sun lol too bright and hot :P thanks you guys

Victims....aren't we all.

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