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Music from the First of Summer
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Music from the First of Summer |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Music from the First of Summer The grasses move like feathers in the breezes through the canyon and the fog in soft of cover brings the ocean’s fragrant sand in And the sleepy peace of dawning with only sheets for cover softly feather heads on pillows touch an eyelash still a dreaming And the buds of petals sing now with a buzz of frantic movement giving purpose to the beauty that has filled the air with fragrance And I want to dance on green grass in a dress of yellow daisies lay me down within the arbor listening as the fruit is ripened But I feel the clock is ticking in the shadows past the hedges caught within the dirt and drainage of the folding fallen wildflowers So I hold on to the questions and I wait for the horizon to reply with mauve of sunset warm with dark and heavy breathing And I know the perfect feeling is in holding on one minute to a look that’s filled with loving falling into drape of silken For the hum in dark of midnight under canopy of stardom singing soft the mad of midday with a sigh within a love song is the music from the first of coming home ---------- part 1 /pip/Forum76/HTML/000497.html part 2 /pip/Forum83/HTML/001872.html part 3 /pip/Forum88/HTML/001936.html |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
How very lovely these 4 writes are... Great writing... Regards to you Martie, Sudhir |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You continue to take my breath away with your words dear Martie! Hugs~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And I know the perfect feeling is in holding on one minute to a look that’s filled with loving falling into drape of silken Yes... exactly that. *S* The change of seasons doesn't change your ability to sing the perfect melody. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie More then lovely.  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"And I know the perfect feeling is in holding on one minute to a look that’s filled with loving falling into drape of sil"ken" Oh, so very, very lovely writing, Martie -- the whole write, just so sweet.  ...jo |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"...I know the perfect feeling is in holding on one minute to a look that’s filled with loving..." *smile* |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Martie - I don't know what to say. They are all such wonderful writes full of emotion and insight. I needed to read them tonight - thank you. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
beautiful write sweet thing.. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - just excellent poetry - thanks for the journey you take me on so often with your wonderful words - Paul [This message has been edited by Goodknight (06-27-2004 03:23 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And I want to dance on green grass in a dress of yellow daisies lay me down within the arbor listening as the fruit is ripened ~*~ You do know, I think I've mentioned it before, that opening up one of your poems, is a present I give myself every time? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Poetessa Contessa, this is an absolute save for me!  What a joyous experience it was for me to listen to such splendid first-of-summer music. I am smiling!  Thank you, Marvellous Martie!  Linda |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Simply lovely ---  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sis~ I've not found the time to read the rest ... but knowing that they are as beautiful as this piece ... I WILL get to them~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Yellow....green....they are good colors for you, as anyone can see in your picture here....and so is blue, as perhaps not everyone can see. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Martie I love to read your poems, they make me feel very human and glad to be alive, this one is no exception. enjoyed -------ice ><> |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
And the buds of petals sing now with a buzz of frantic movement giving purpose to the beauty that has filled the air with fragrance This is gifted phrasing. There is so much meaning throughout the poem. Now I need to find the other three. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sigh Martie...everyday you gift us with your words. Simply beautiful. Mxx The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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