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Susan
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0 posted 2004-06-27 12:40 PM



Watch your wicked words
For they are not a toy
Their shards are sharp
They deeply cut
And their wounds not easily healed

Think twice before you speak
No wiser counsel given
For what is said
Cannot be unsaid
And burns deeply as a brand

So hold your darted tongue
Let the poison drip unstung
For the bite of spite
Tears the heart
And leaves holes gaping

Watch your wicked words
That they dare not escape
That you may wake upon the morn
Soul still intact
And “regret” being a word you need not suffer from

S.A.T.


Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-06-27 12:45 PM


I often need reminding

thanks

Ericc
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2 posted 2004-06-27 12:48 PM


Wise words...beautifuly told.

Eric

Susan
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3 posted 2004-06-27 12:55 PM


I work in a small office and sometimes I am amazed at the words so carelessly tossed about, as if they were nothing more than a bit of sound, harmless, and soon forgotten.

Thanks for reading, and for your comments.  Your words have great effect.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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4 posted 2004-06-27 01:43 PM


Susan,  they are seldom forgotten,  those
who they land on hurt so deeply....and scars
heal very slowly...your wisdom speaks well
of you...

ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2004-06-27 04:56 PM


This should be the mantra of all humanity...
You have a beautiful mind...well placed in with your beautiful heart.
TD

miscellanea
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6 posted 2004-06-27 05:02 PM


Watch your wicked words
For they are not a toy
Their shards are sharp
They deeply cut
And their wounds not easily healed

   This piece of wisdom is just the beginning of this beautiful piece.  Yes, hold those words because not only do they sting the target, but often stir up guilt within.  Thanks for the reminder.
       miscellanea

iliana
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7 posted 2004-06-27 05:04 PM


Susan, you are so right; words can be weapons that slay the heart!  Much enjoyed your wisdom.   .....jo
Susan
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8 posted 2004-06-27 05:25 PM


Thanks dear poet friends.  Your replies warm my heart.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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