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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2004-06-25 06:07 PM

I'll listen for you in the thunder
look for you in the sky
brood over me in twilight
rain for me, while I cry

wash away my anguish
as I'm drenched beneath your ache
I'll dance for you in puddles
and be left devastated in your stormy wake

I'll damn the skies
and curse them for their blue
stay inside and wait once more
for the storm of you.....

~SEA~

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-06-25 06:12 PM

SEA, what an expressive poem. I loved it.

.....jo

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-06-25 06:13 PM

Beautiful Susan..captivating.
Much enjoyed the read.
Hugs

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

3 posted 2004-06-25 07:48 PM

Sea,
Really awesome writing, full of passion
Enjoyed
sadelite

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

4 posted 2004-06-25 07:52 PM

Sadie is oh so right - this is full of passion well presented - Paul

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-06-25 09:03 PM

Liked this a lot.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2004-06-25 09:49 PM

Sea

I've known some storms in my life that were people...the rush is great! Enjoyed this.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

7 posted 2004-06-26 01:27 AM

you "storm" nicely.....

There's a place I like to hide-open your mind to me-Visualise your dream- Record it in the present tense, I am smiling next to you, in silent lucidity

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-06-26 04:11 AM

we all have storms in our forecasts lately

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

9 posted 2004-06-26 08:02 AM

I'll listen for you in the thunder
look for you in the sky
brood over me in twilight
rain for me, while I cry
==========================

Let It Rain...OH LET IT RAIN...
let it Rain down on SEA!!
(IWIHWT!!!!)

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2004-06-26 11:41 AM

You know what I know?
I know you haven't lost your touch.
So good to have you back posting
your pretty poems again, little one...

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

11 posted 2004-06-26 12:45 PM

There is nothing more exciting than a SEA at storm!

EA

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

12 posted 2004-06-26 02:19 PM

SEA~
It is such a pleasure to read you ... *sigh*
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

13 posted 2004-06-26 07:39 PM

This reads like a giant tidal wave of emotions.
But when you come up for air you breathe so much life onto these blue pages.

Hugs, SEA gal~

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

14 posted 2004-06-27 12:43 PM

Beautiful!!

Eric

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

15 posted 2004-06-27 05:38 PM

nice

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