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Sequins and Beads
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Sequins and Beads |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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~*~ Wading out the rise of tide knee deep in the moonlight, void of shadows dancing weightless as a leaf floating down stream. The sound of trees whisper weeping through willows, behind my back. As the water runs off beneath a cobalt sky, lapping in a sleepy wake. Waves of quicksilver shimmer and glisten, stranded in sequins and beads. ~*~ |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
What a beautiful, visual write! What a serene, peaceful, and inspiring place! It was beautifully descriptive I could see, clearly as I see these words I type in response. You have a magical way with words. Your posts are always so visually inviting and engaging. Thank you very much for allowing me to read it. Well worth the stop here. Kevin |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Bluesy, this shimmering write of yours is going straight into my library. It's just beautiful and has an sense of enchantment about it.  ......jo |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
lapping in a sleepy wake. Waves of quicksilver shimmer and glisten, stranded in sequins and beads. stranded, but not far from your pen of perfect pitch in this beautiful and intriguing piece, my dear girl  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BluesSerenade You pick a mean harp. Beautiful |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lori Lovely lovely!!! |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
I love the title it conjures up all kinds of pictures of the mind. Just like a little child I am drawn to the glitter of sequins and beads. If it sparkles I have to stop and a look see and think... "Isn't that pretty." Good one. BonBon  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Simply exquisite. SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Bluesy, I just have to add my voice to the others here. A truly sparkling piece! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Bluesy....love this ! Hugs~ Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh the imagery! lovely! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Yummm, I love the sounds of that place. Do you go there often? Nice write, dear lady. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Waves of quicksilver shimmer and glisten, stranded in sequins and beads. ================================ ya knew the moth would be here sooner or later, right?  When ever you write of the ocean...Im gonna walk on your beach. Beautiful offering Lori-girl. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
a beautiful image left me with haunting (wonderfully so) memories thank you There's a place I like to hide-open your mind to me-Visualise your dream- Record it in the present tense, I am smiling next to you, in silent lucidity |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I am so glad to see this from you! It's high time you got to the joy, and I hope you keep it from here on out....fairy tales can come true, and serendipity is alive and well. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I shall always think of you now with each watch of the tide - lovely indeed! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Love the view through your eyes . . . always have, and will and . . . been meaning to ask for the longest, what are you holding in your hand (in the picture here of course!)??? I've named it almost everything - sea gull feathers being my favorite fantasy, and a few you probably wouldn't want to hear. Finally I had to ask - and I hope it's not something terribly obvious.... but, please, lay it on me! LOL jimmy |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Very nice, love the language... ------ice ><> |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
so peaceful with not a care in the world but the embrace of the sea ohhhh, how lovely this was....thank you |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Such a vivid picture of a night and the sea. Well done! KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is incredibly lovely, dear lady! *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Just suffice it to say, that each line bears repeating! There is magic in your pen, Lovely Lori! May you words forever "shimmer and glisten"! Linda |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
You went to the beach without me AGAIN??? Hurry back Bluesy...  |
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