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Open Poetry #32

Boeing out to gravity.

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

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Lurking

0 posted 2004-06-26 05:39 PM

Boeing out to gravity

Two fiery trails that con
the naked eye
as they blaze through
  pinky summer skies.
lofty
        spirits
    stream
gently
         through
the cold clear air,
exhausted
from that
heavenly march.

Andrew

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2004-06-27 12:35 PM

I especially liked the mix of contrasts you conveyed in this.

Very nice, indeed~

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-06-27 02:50 AM

Now you have me really wondering, Marshalzu! Enjoyed this.

.....jo

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-06-27 12:31 PM

Ah, I see the contrails.

Susan

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passing shadows
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displaced

4 posted 2004-06-27 12:55 PM

good imagery

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