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Empty Rain |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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I awoke today to the sound of rain only it didn't sound like the soothing trickle one is use too it was more like echoes, echoes of emptying tears Ever hear an empty tear before? the welling pain of nothing where someone once thought something existed, the endless fall of anticipated anguish, the thunder of reality as it rolls over you, through you, and then passes you by like most everything else Today, to the sound of empty rain, I awoke |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
sad sad sad |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Hi Helen ... yes, I suppose ... the better outlook is the character now knows. Rain has that effect somedays. Hope yours is sunny and bright! (congrats on the tests!) |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
full or empty rain brings tears of the unspoken |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
So many outstanding lines.....appreciated for the depth of the feeling they display. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
So sad, but well expressed. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, there is a better outlook tomorrow is another day |
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